Month of WIPS

[cutiesonthehorizon]

 

MONTH OF WIPS

The April ExoWriMo just finished, leaving the lot of us with unfinished fics that need some more work on them. The last few months were generally a bit harder on the students and work for all of us, so let's take a breather and focus this month on finishing what we can, before next month's ExoWriMo brings us a new theme and new fics:)

This is the place where you can comment with your progress on oooold fics as well as the ones you started just a few days back. Squee about your word counts, show as excerpts, moan about RL getting in the way of writing or brainstorm plot to finish that darn fic that is trying to get you:) Anything you feel like, the comment section is here for you:) Enjoy!

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[cinelitchick]

I wrote my first scene for Chapter 9! It's a two-hander featuring Marcus and Mouse. It does some heavy lifting while also giving these two a proper scene with an honest conversation — something they (and I) desperately needed to happen. Today's word count is 1291. I feel like the roller coaster is picking up speed as we near the finish line for Part 2. Wheeeee!!!! XD

Today's sample:

Marcus opened his front door and stepped out onto the porch as Mouse pulled up the long dirt driveway. He was dressed in black skinny jeans and a fitted black T-shirt that drew proper attention to his sculpted arms. The air had warmed up considerably. It nearly felt like summer. A light breeze tickled the back of his neck below the end of his hairline. It teased his scalp as the close-cropped hair left little protection. He watched as she came up the walk stopping at the foot of the stairs. She was wearing a wrap dress, a style she favored. It was red with a floral print. Her hair was pinned back at the sides, as usual.

“We need to talk,” she said.

“Do we?”

“Don’t be an ass.”

“I’m not sure I know how else to be.”

“How are you with Tomas?” she countered.

[cutiesonthehorizon]

Ooh, prideful Tomas and wary Bennett with a premonition of nasty future, ehehe. How lovely. Also a nice word count once again!

[cutiesonthehorizon]

Haha at the [redacted] parts :D No spoiling us there I see XD I love the effect Tomas has on Marcus :D And Bennett being the suspicious one :D

[cutiesonthehorizon]

Oooh, Marcus seems pissed:) Wondering who they're trying to save... maybe Rose? Hm, most curious. Also congrats on finishing chapter 8 and the word count! Nice!

[cutiesonthehorizon]

Marcus' sculpted arms, ehehe... I can't forget the pic on discord :D

[cutiesonthehorizon]

Ah, I was abysmal at reporting in ever since last week, on the other hand I managed to write something every day. Yet I didn't keep an eye on my word count, aye. So for now, I have about 56K of the adopt AU and 6K on the whumpexchange fic... 2.3 of those I managed to write today, yay!

As I can't show an excerpt from the exchange fic, here's a little bit from the adopt AU:

„Don't ever trust them, Tomas. Whatever those things say, don't let them in." Marcus said and Tomas put his head down with a weary sigh that belied his youth.

"I'm trying to keep them away, but it's getting so much harder. I'm just... so tired all the time."

Marcus felt for him, he really did. He knew the weariness, fought it for over a year after Gabriel died... fought it at the boy's home before the church bought him like a piece of meat and God saved him from the fate of the forgotten. He didn't want the same for Tomas.

[cinelitchick]

Nor can I. I couldn't resist putting that in. XD

[cinelitchick]

A little pissed, but mostly determined. He's got his groove back and he has no intention of losing it again.

Thank you!

[cinelitchick]

I thought you'd get a kick out of the use of [redacted] lolol

[cinelitchick]

Yessssss!!!!! Marcus' heart breaking for the weary young Tomas is such good h/c. I've missed these samples SO MUCH!!! The word count totals for both fics are very impressive! Each will be a healthy size when all is said and done. Keep up the amazing work! <3 <3 <3

[cinelitchick]

So I wrote 3 scenes today. I have officially arrived at the exorcism of Part 2. At this point, I believe I have roughly a chapter and a half left to write for this section. That makes me giddy. Not gonna lie. My word total for the day is a whopping (and record breaking) 2065. I'm at over 23K for Part 2 alone. *bug eyes*

Today's sample:

“You ready for this?” Marcus asked.

“I am if you are,” was the reply.

Marcus smiled. “Haven’t you heard? I was born ready.”

Tomas laughed heartily. “Good! I like this version of you very much. I look forward to spending more time with this Marcus.”

“Yeah, well. One thing at a time.” He glanced up at the hospital again.

Tomas kept his gaze on his friend. “I think Devon sees you as a fragile little teacup; the finest china used for only special guests.”

Marcus’ eyes slid down till they landed on Tomas’ face. “I’m no one’s teacup, luv. Fragile or otherwise.” He was silent for a moment. “How do YOU see me?”

Tomas turned to face the priest, sliding his hand around the back of Marcus’ neck. “The mongoose I want under the house when the snakes slither by.”

“Am I interrupting?”

Bennett was not enjoying the scene playing out before him.

Smiling as he kept his eyes on Marcus, Tomas said, “What an excellent day for an exorcism.”

[cinelitchick]

I wrote what is most likely one of the final scenes for Chapter 9. It's a breather featuring Mouse and Rose that's designed to not only push forward their storyline, but break up the exorcism which is the focus of this chapter. There is probably one scene, MAYBE two, left before I start the final chapter of Part 2. My word count was 1K flat.

Today's sample:

“You really like that word, don’t you? It’s not insane, it’s just. I know the consequences of my actions and for once, I care. This story may bring about my death, but it also gave me a friend. There’s a weird balance in that.” Rose took a bite out of her burger with exaggerated relish.

“You’re going to lure Tomas with a sensational story about his extracurriculars and you’re going to use Marcus as the bait, aren’t you?”

“He won’t bite otherwise. Plus, I know he’s a fan. Maybe that will get me a reprieve?” She folded a fry in half and popped it into her mouth. “I’ve been doing this for awhile. I know how to survive.”

“You’re annoying as hell,” Amelia said, “but I know I don’t want to lose you. I think if he wants you, he’ll find you. God, I wanted to rip your throat out and shove it up your ass a few weeks ago.”

At that, Rose let out a big, nose-snorting laugh, which caused the psychologist to join in with her own giggle. Neither wanted to dwell on the probability of death this story could bring.

The reporter raised her soda cup. “A toast.”

Amelia followed suit. “What are we toasting?”

“To Tomas Ortega. Purveyor of unlikely friendships. He may have gotten Marcus, but I got you, babe.”

The brunette’s eyes were as wide as her smile. “Hear hear! To Tomas!”

[cinelitchick]

So remember that whole one scene left maybe two? I was wrong. There's at least two scenes left, possibly three. I knew I was probably going to regret saying anything once I resumed the exorcism and on that note I was right. I returned to the scene of the ritual today and managed 1069 words.

Today's sample:

“You know this is the only way,” Tomas began.

Marcus nodded and glanced at Bennett.

“This isn’t about him, Marcus. This is about [redacted] and getting rid of that demon once and for all.”

“I know. It’s our only play.”

“You’ve done an admirable job so far. I’ll be honest: You have gotten further in the past few hours then I thought was possible considering how long that thing has been inside her. Now let’s finish this.”

“I suppose this is a true partnership now,” the priest said with a rueful grin.

“You did leave God for me." The grin was returned. "It would be rude to walk away now.”

“How far are you willing to take this?” Marcus knew he was asking about more than just the exorcism.

“As far as it goes.” Tomas knew exactly what he was being asked.

Marcus cupped the back of Tomas’ neck for a few seconds, holding his tender gaze as he did so. When he released him, he saw they had an audience.

[cutiesonthehorizon]

Ooh, Marcus as a mongoose, now that I can see:) Also lol at Bennett being put out by their 'flirting', ehehe. Niiiiice wordcount!

[cutiesonthehorizon]

OoO.... that is an interesting scene... the girls are setting up a trap!

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Hehe, I have a feeling I know who [redacted] might be :D

[cutiesonthehorizon]

Once again, didn't report in for a few days, sigh. I wrote about 600 words for the adopt AU today (maybe I can manage a bit more later today still). Most of my wordcount for the last three days went to the whump exchange fic as that one has a deadline. I managed to add about 4K of words... I have the middle but still need the start and the end. With that said, I sadly have no sample right now.... but I shall provide some in the following day or two:)

[cinelitchick]

The mongoose line is what Hannibal said to Will in Aperitif. I couldn't resist. Bennett is so over them. XD Thank you! I may never hit such heights again, so I'm savoring it.

[cinelitchick]

They're bonding and hoping to catch Tomas. Whether they do or if there will be casualties is anybody's guess. ;D It is an interesting scene. TBH, I may need to go back and work on it during the editing phase. Not sure. It's so different in a way, I'm not sure how I feel about it.

[cinelitchick]

Did I screw up and inadvertently leave one bit *not* redacted? Cuz I came close last night. lol If not, tell me your guess!

[cinelitchick]

As long as you're writing! 600 words for the adopt AU and 4K(!) for the exchange is awesome! I wait with baited breath for your next sample. <3

[cutiesonthehorizon]

Well *looks around, pretty sure I'm gonna make a fool of myself, but whatevs, there's no one else here lol*.... is [redacted] by chance Mouse? And nope, you didn't leave a name anywhere... though you left in one place it's a she :D

[cutiesonthehorizon]

*hugs* Your support makes me write all the more:) I'll make sure there will be new words and a sample tomorrow:)

[cinelitchick]

*hugs* Awww! I'm blushing! Seriously! Your support means the world to me, too! It makes me so happy when I see you've commented on my samples! :D

[cinelitchick]

The "she" I allowed as a tease. Your guess, however, is incorrect. *She says, letting out a long sigh of relief.*